After some consideration, I really do not have anything new to add to this photo set that I did not include in the comments in the previous post about the Veteran's Memorial. Considering the weather conditions, I am quite content with these photos and had fewer bad exposures than the previous set.
Stats:
309 Photos total
164 Photos remaining after bad images were removed
43+ Good Keepers
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You have a few good ones in here. But you need to tighten up on the edit. There are a few that are very similar. And in those similar sets, there is one that has a moment or more action to it. Those should be your selects and then drop the others. A few almost look like tighter crops of the frame before it.
ReplyDeleteI'm noticing you have a little more intent on the PJ artsy stuff. That's good.
The three frames that stand out to me are as follows:
Shot of the old guy in sunglasses saluting under the tree. You got close and didn't "snipe" the old guy.
The frame of the color guard and the old guy looking up at the flag is nice as well. It's a moment and it's not much of a moment, but it definitely separates the frame from the other six that you have of the color guard.
And the last shot of the firing squad. Nice repetition and then a focus on one guy in particular. And the casings in the air are a nice touch.
When you're composing your frame, I want you to edit in the viewfinder from the outside edges in. See what is in the frame and then start moving around until you have what you want in there and what you don't want isn't there any more. Watch for dead space, random arms, car headlights, etc.
I'm assuming this ceremony lasted about an hour? If so, 309 is pretty high. That means you are consistently shooting more than five frames a minute. And almost half of those images weren't usable. Take a breath, make sure you exposure is on and keep an eye on the light so you can adjust accordingly. Then make sure you have edited the frame through the viewfinder and you have a purpose behind clicking that shutter.